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Look in the Mirror by ~TheBear0:iconTheBear0:



I am the one they turned their backs on.

They all walked away.

They left me here in my corner alone and friendless.

Many pass by but they do not fill the void.

I hate their stares of pity.

Some take interest in me, curled up in my corner.

My pen and paper in hand.

I see society slip by in this way.

Never stopping they are, always moving on.

Flowing through my fingers like a hand full of sand.

Nothing can fill the void.

For eternity I have sat here.

I watch now as though I am not human.

I see the best and worst of society.

I’ve seen a thousand tears.

I’ve seen a thousand fights.

The emotions exhibited by society.

Yet what is there to cry about?

Everything is pointless.

It is this way because society is doomed.

People dream of world peace.

This will never happen.

Many believe society will end by the hands of something other worldly.

We don’t have far to look to find the reason.

We just need to look in the mirror.




                                By: Barry McCarty
©2005-2009 ~TheBear0
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this is a seveirly chopped down verson of annother poem of mine. I did this for english class and got a 100% on it.
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i can definitely see why you got 100 on it
thanks.

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What is life, other than a meaningless exsistance with a definate end?
...:) I can relate to this esspecailly the other day lots of friend issues

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"I.L.O.V.E.Y.O.U" has 8 letters
but yet... so does`-->BuLlShIt
thanks its nice to know there are others like me.

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What is life, other than a meaningless exsistance with a definate end?
your welcome :hug:

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"I.L.O.V.E.Y.O.U" has 8 letters
but yet... so does`-->BuLlShIt
in a world so empty one finds understanding.......

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What is life, other than a meaningless exsistance with a definate end?
Well, it's true.
There is a large percentage that this will happen.
I don't have hard numbers, but I'm sure there is.
Damnit, now I have to go and listen to The Pixies - Wave Of Mutilation.
Curse you cinnamon covered donuts.

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This post has been a part of your destiny.
nice! thanks for the comment.

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What is life, other than a meaningless exsistance with a definate end?
beautfiul and strong. Well done love

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"Seizures are...just... interactive dreams!!"

Proud Alpha of the Venti Nordici Pack
thanks it is great though it is a slaughtered version. thankls for the comment love.

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What is life, other than a meaningless exsistance with a definate end?

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